The bones are fine, but two assumptions could undo the whole plan: the trust appears unfunded (so it avoids nothing), and it is written as if a revocable trust shields assets from creditors and long-term-care costs — which it does not.
This is a self-prepared revocable living trust for a married homeowner with two minor children, paired with a short pour-over will. It covers who manages the assets, who inherits, and what happens if the grantor becomes incapacitated.
The structure itself is ordinary and mostly sound. The problems are in the assumptions. First, funding: the trust lists a home and two accounts on its schedule, but nothing in the document shows those assets were actually retitled into the trust. An unfunded trust controls nothing, and the assets it was meant to keep out of probate will go through probate anyway. Second, protection: the document repeatedly describes the trust as "protecting" the family's assets. A revocable trust does not protect assets from the grantor's own creditors or from Medicaid / nursing-home recovery, because the grantor keeps full control and can revoke it at any time. That is the single most common — and most expensive — misunderstanding in DIY Estate Planning.
None of this means starting over. Funding the trust, adding a few missing pieces, and correcting the protection language would turn this into a working plan. The points below are the ones to confirm with a licensed attorney before relying on it.